Richard Lanham in Analyzing Prose describes high style as writing that uses Latinate diction, patterms such as isocolon, chiasmus or parallelism, and other noticeable forms. He describes middle style,"see-through" writing (p. 185)that can also be contrived, as perhaps an ideal type of writing. He describes low style as language that deals with facts and that uses down-home Anglo-Saxon diction.
The book chapter that I edited in ENG 5365 used a rather low style of writing. There were few graceful turns of phrase and many grammatical errors and redundant sentences. I perceived that certain sections might have been copied from a how-to manual. The topics discussed ranged from storage of student portfolios to what computer resources would be needed. No word plays, no repetition, and no alliteration provided rhetorical interest. I spent my time improving clarity and making suggestions on removing jargon and clumsy phrases.
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